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Si t'a envie ou pas by ~maidenofwar:iconmaidenofwar:



Je me retiens
Et tu reviens
Encore et encore pour quelque chose qui n’existe plus
Et je me dis
Que si
J’avais un peu plus de personnalité
Si j’arrivais à t’oublier
J’irais beaucoup mieux

Mensonge pour mon âme et le feu qui brûle la flamme
J’en ai marre
De ça
J’en ai marre de toi
Et même si je t’adore, si j’adorerais te dire le fond de ma pensée
Te dire que je pourrais un jour t’oublier
Je sais que ça ne sert a rien, ça ne servira jamais a quoi que soit

Car j’aurais toujours envie de toi
©2008-2009 ~maidenofwar
:iconmaidenofwar:

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damn… *runs around like a spaz… once again!*

I just keep listening to BB Brunes… who, for those who don’t know, are a mainstream punk band from France, and they’re FOOKIN GOOD!

Like, for the punk fans, you know that feeling you get if you’re listening to something like black flag, or gallows? that’s how good they are… like you want to run around, breaking everything, and like you’ll never break.
Haha… punk’s not bloody dead!

Anywho, yh… back to this…
Title is a line from ‘Dis Moi’ by BB Brunes.
I hardly ever write in French.
This is… harsh.

Please comment ^ ^

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Chère Gardien
Je te veux
Et je ne peut pensée a rien d’autre
Je suis devenu obsédée par l’idée d’être dans tes bras
Mais je ne sais pas si toi, tu veux de moi

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:iconturmann:
Online translators are horrible. "Dear Custodian" hahahahaha.

Collectively, through three separate and very different translations, I think I understand it.

Sie entscheiden, was Ihre Wünsche sind.
Wenn Sie wirklich ein Ende sehen wollen, dann machen Sie denjenigen.
Viel davon, wem ich sage, wird beschränkt, weil das für mich unmöglich ist, in die Zukunft zu sehen. Wenn "keiner" etwas laut genug bezweifelt, muss ich überlegen.

Haha!

--
Whatever it is, tell someone about it....
:iconmaidenofwar:
haha... :lmao:
my god... yh I know, they're terrible aren't they?

heh, ya know you could've asked for a translation? that could defeat purpose but yh...

aw...je n'y comprend rien!
no fair!
I think I just rediscovered the extent to which online translators go to... though, admittedly german is closer to english so it can't have been that bad...
but i'd rather not answer to that in case the translator lied...
I should now need to find a german-speaking friend to translate this...
;p


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"Never sit and wait for death... Never waste a single breath..."
:iconturmann:
Haha, I could have, but then that would have required effort on your part.

*nods* they are... kinda flawed. But yeah, you're right, it is closer.
Um... let's see... *uses online translator and makes some minor corrections*

You decide what your wishes are.
If you really want to see an end, then make it so.
A lot of to what I say is limited because it is impossible for me to see into the future. If "nobody" doubts something to a large enough extent, I must consider that and not make any promises.

--
Whatever it is, tell someone about it....
:iconmaidenofwar:
well, not much effort. and i wouldn't mind ^ ^

but... I'd rather you have a proper translation... because i tried some of them, and they were just more then terrible...


I hold myself back
And you return
Again and again for something that no longer exists
And I tell myself
That if
I had a little more personality
If I could forget you
I’d be a lot better

A lie for my soul and the fire that burns the flame
I’m tired
of this
I’m tired of you
And even if I adore you, even if I’d love to tell you the bottom of my thoughts
To tell you that I could forget you one day
I know that it’s useless, that it will never aid in anyway

Because I’ll always want you
--

Dear Guardian
I want you
And I can’t think of anything else
I’ve become obsessed with the idea of being in your arms
But I don’t know if you want me




(sorry, the html codes keep effin up) :X
there! ^ ^'


and in response to that:
perhaps I have the power to see an end, but right now it's not what I want to do.
well, then everything that everybody says is limited because no one can see the future.
and that doesn't reduce the possibility of any promises realising.


--

"Never sit and wait for death... Never waste a single breath..."
:iconturmann:
Actually that's quite different from what the translation presented, haha.

Yeah, I know that promises can happen just as much as they can't happen, but, well I don't like to make promises to people, because I have a horrible time when it comes to trying to predict myself, and the inconsistency causes me to break a lot of the promises, I don't do what I was sure that I wanted and had to do a day earlier, and so I just avoid promising anything at all. I can't live in the future, I really can't plan ahead, all I can do is know what I think and feel now, and act upon that.
Basically, long term goals don't work well with me. ^^;

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Whatever it is, tell someone about it....
:iconunlabeled-x-retarded:
Hmm..I gotta start listening to them then..

--
_DontLabelMusic,EnjoyIt_

=.NoOneWantsToBeThemselves.TryHards.Wannabes.Fakes.KillThemAll.AndTheirMinds.=

_You'reNotASoupCan.You'reAPerson._
:iconfuckedupbassist:
I don't speak French.
Oh actually, yes I do.
-Clears throat-
Omlette Du Fromaige.
I'm off the fooking chain, betch.

--
Rock Is Dead...
Long Live Paper And Scissors...

"How many times have you been pushed around?
And how many times have your friends let you down... Is anybody there...? Does anybody care..?"
:iconmaidenofwar:
*blinks*
you faved without understanding it?!


--

"Never sit and wait for death... Never waste a single breath..."
:iconunlabeled-x-retarded:
I can find me an online translator..

And since when do I understand anything..?

--
_DontLabelMusic,EnjoyIt_

=.NoOneWantsToBeThemselves.TryHards.Wannabes.Fakes.KillThemAll.AndTheirMinds.=

_You'reNotASoupCan.You'reAPerson._

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